Get professional eyes on your story before you share it with publishers.

With over 40 years of combined experience working in the children's book industry, we've seen too many stories with great ideas in need of refined execution before they're sent to publishers. (But too many times, we see this after something has been shared. )


That's why we're offering a critique review to help you know what's working and what needs to be improved -- from your plot and characters to your readability and marketability.


All critiques include our Official Story Seal of Approval Rating from 1-3, so you'll instantly know if you need a full rewrite or if you're ready to prepare for publication. Get signed up below to reserve your spot. (Space is limited.)

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What to send after you've booked:

Word Doc or PDF submission of a picture book story that's 1,000 words or less OR the first 10-pages of your chapter book or novel + a 1-page synopsis

Story in proper format: size 12-font and double-spaced


  • What do I send for critique?
    Please send us either a Word Doc or PDF of either your complete picture book manuscript OR the first 10-pages of your chapter book or novel, plus 1-page synopsis in proper story format. (12-point font, double-spaced.)
  • Where do I send my critique for feedback?
    Please email either a Word Doc or PDF of your story manuscript to hello@journeytokidlit.com to submit your story for written feedback.
  • How long will it take to receive feedback?
    Your story notes will be delivered via email within 4-6 weeks of submission. If you don't see a confirmation email from us upon booking or don't receive your notes in that timeframe, please be sure to reach out for help.
  • What if I don't receive my critique notes?
    If it's been past the deadline, please email us ASAP at hello@journeytokidlit.com to have your notes resent. You can also email us with any questions about the process as well.

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