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Add the Submission Tracker to your order.

Just $9!
You're about to start sending your story out to agents and publishers — make sure you don't lose track of who you've submitted to, what you sent, and who still owes you a response.

Inside, you'll get a plug-and-play Submission Tracker (available in both Google Sheets AND Excel) so you can keep every submission organized in one place.

If you're the kind of writer who refuses to fumble a "yes" because you can't remember who you queried in March, add this to your order.
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  • 1xQuerying Snapshot: Feedback on Your Submission Materials$97
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Please Note: Snapshot reviews are a hybrid of human editorial review and our custom Kidlit Writing Assistants (AI tools we built specifically on children's book craft). Your manuscript stays private and is never shared publicly or used to train outside AI.


You must share your materials with our editing team to receive feedback within 30-days of purchase. For a fully human review, see our written critique service. This is a non-refundable service.You must share your materials with our editing team to receive feedback within 30-days of purchase. This is a non-refundable service.

Send us your manuscript + query letter and we'll return your feedback in just 1-2 weeks.


Your Querying Snapshot Includes:

  • Your submission readiness status 
  • Polishing notes for your manuscript 
  • Query letter + sample pitch rewrites 
  • Custom agency & publisher matches so you have a submission roadmap to start with


  • What do I send for feedback?
    Please send us either a Word Doc or PDF of finished manuscript, plus query letter in proper story format. (12-point font, double-spaced.)
  • Where do I send my story for feedback?
    Please email either a Word Doc or PDF of your story manuscript to hello@journeytokidlit.com to submit your story for written feedback.
  • How long will it take to receive feedback?
    Your story notes will be delivered via email within 1-2 weeks of submission. If you don't see a confirmation email from us upon booking or don't receive your notes in that timeframe, please email us at hello@journeytokidlit.com for help.
  • What if I don't receive my feedback?
    If it's been past the deadline, please email us ASAP at hello@journeytokidlit.com to have your notes resent. You can also email us with any questions about the process as well.

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