Get you a quick query review to see potential publishing feedback (and avoid rejection due to a weak pitch).

This is for you if you've finished your manuscript and written a query to share with publishers, but you're wondering: Am I pitching my book correctly? Is my query letter formatted right? Will this pitch grab an agent's attention?


This short, personalized review of your query letter + manuscript helps you know if your pitch is strong before you begin sharing your book with publishers or agents.

Your Query Snapshot Review includes:

  • Expert feedback on your query letter, including positioning, pitch alternatives, and formatting 
  • Category and age alignment confirmation for market-fit 
  • Red flags that might lead to a rejection from a publisher 
  • A personalized list of agencies and publishers who might be interested in your story

Enter your information below to get personalized feedback on your query letter for just $47.

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  • 1xQuery Letter Snapshot: Feedback Review$47
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Please Note: You must share your materials with our editing team to receive feedback within 30-days of purchase. This is a non-refundable service.


  • What do I send for feedback?
    Please send us either a Word Doc or PDF of either your complete picture book manuscript OR the first 10-pages of your chapter book or novel, plus query letter in proper story format. (12-point font, double-spaced.)
  • Where do I send my story for feedback?
    Please email either a Word Doc or PDF of your story manuscript to hello@journeytokidlit.com to submit your story for written feedback.
  • How long will it take to receive feedback?
    Your story notes will be delivered via email within 1-2 weeks of submission. If you don't see a confirmation email from us upon booking or don't receive your notes in that timeframe, please be sure to reach out for help.
  • What if I don't receive my feedback?
    If it's been past the deadline, please email us ASAP at hello@journeytokidlit.com to have your notes resent. You can also email us with any questions about the process as well.

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