
Get you a quick query review to see potential publishing feedback (and avoid rejection due to a weak pitch).
This is for you if you've finished your manuscript and written a query to share with publishers, but you're wondering: Am I pitching my book correctly? Is my query letter formatted right? Will this pitch grab an agent's attention?
This short, personalized review of your query letter + manuscript helps you know if your pitch is strong before you begin sharing your book with publishers or agents.
Your Query Snapshot Review includes:
- Expert feedback on your query letter, including positioning, pitch alternatives, and formatting
- Category and age alignment confirmation for market-fit
- Red flags that might lead to a rejection from a publisher
- A personalized list of agencies and publishers who might be interested in your story
Enter your information below to get personalized feedback on your query letter for just $47.
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The Kidlit Editing Workbook gives you a clear, step-by-step path to act on your Story Analyzer results and confidently revise your book.
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A Character Profile Card + Dos & Don’ts to strengthen your cast
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Inside, you’ll get:
A Character Profile Card + Dos & Don’ts to strengthen your cast
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A Complete Editing Checklist so you don’t miss a thing
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Please Note: You must share your materials with our editing team to receive feedback within 30-days of purchase. This is a non-refundable service.
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- What do I send for feedback?Please send us either a Word Doc or PDF of either your complete picture book manuscript OR the first 10-pages of your chapter book or novel, plus query letter in proper story format. (12-point font, double-spaced.)
- Where do I send my story for feedback?Please email either a Word Doc or PDF of your story manuscript to hello@journeytokidlit.com to submit your story for written feedback.
- How long will it take to receive feedback?Your story notes will be delivered via email within 1-2 weeks of submission. If you don't see a confirmation email from us upon booking or don't receive your notes in that timeframe, please be sure to reach out for help.
- What if I don't receive my feedback?If it's been past the deadline, please email us ASAP at hello@journeytokidlit.com to have your notes resent. You can also email us with any questions about the process as well.