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Chapter Book or Novel - Written Critique$247

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  • 1xChapter Book or Novel - Written Critique$247

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Full critique review of your novel outline and first 10-pages. Requirements include:

Word Doc or PDF submission of the first 10-pgs of your story 

Story in proper format: size 12-font and double-spaced 

Chapter Outline + One-page Synopsis to help the reviewer know the direction of the story 

Author will receive: 

Full Story Feedback including what's working and what needs to be improved -- from your plot and characters to your readability and marketability 

Official Story Seal of Approval Rating to know if you need a full rewrite or prep for publication

"I am so pleased with my critique! Brooke's recommendations gave me clarity about issues I needed to address. She obviously knows the writing and publishing business!"

Elizabethann Moore
Happy Customer 

"My repeat service with Brooke is because she has guided me to what she calls 'the actual story that wants to be written'. It helps me get out of my own way with word choice, formality, structure, and content. I would highly recommend Brooke."

Erin Murphy